The e-factor
The E-factor is feeling the people. The E stand for enthusiasm . some people if they feeling happy they told anybody they have hilarious, this name enthusiasm. But some people if they feeling happy they don't appear to have the joy , these are don't feeling enthusiasm. I have some points about this topic.
The first point, why are some people more enthusiastic than other people. some people feeling enthusiasm when they happy but, some people don't feeling enthusiasm because the people who are care and loves to anything feeling happy they will feel enthusiasm but, some people loves to anything feeling happy but don't care to things they don't feel enthusiasm. I feeling enthusiasm if I care and loves anything feeling happy. But i don't feeling enthusiasm when happening anything make me feel happy but i don't care this things.
The second point, the person enthusiastic, the person has enthusiasm when he grow up not in his born. The person became enthusiasm when he grow up because he know what for love and care. the person needed what he love and care so enthusiastic to its.
The last point, how can you make yourself an enthusiastic person, do you need make yourself an enthusiastic you must care attention to the things that make you happy. If you don't care to anything make you happy don't became a person enthusiastic.
In conclusion, these are some points about E-FACTOR.the first point is why are some people more enthusiastic than other people, the second point is the person enthusiastic and the last point is how can you make yourself an enthusiastic person. If you feel happy enthusiasm for it.
Ali,
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